Revisions of pitch - 40

The feedback from our teacher made me think of several new ideas for the film. This includes using a scene in which the popular girl enters the college with three girls to make her seem more superior and also that she demands her friend holds her bag to make her come across as 'bitchy'. Also to show the difference in wealth I thought of the idea of her friends asking Jessica (popular girl) to buy a concert ticket but Jessica has to decline because secretly she can not afford it.

 This image represents the protagonists superior nature as her friends surround her and walk side by side at all times.