After our submitting our first rough cut, we thought it was necessary to get some feedback. There both positive and negative point of feedback in response to our rough cut, but we found it really useful. The summary of the feedback was; to make the character of Jessica's social- economic background more clear, and to establish more of a storyline for our audience.
This filming session wasn't originally part of our planning, but it defiantly was made necessary. We decided to add a couple of extra scenes to make the storyline more clearer for the audience, as well as establishing more of the character, Jessica. We also had to re-do one of our scenes that included a eviction notice as a prop, as our previous scene didn't look as professional, because the prop wasn't very convincing. We also had trouble of showing the character of Jessica's poor economic background, so changed our previous scene we filmed and showed her stealing from a charity shop, as well as a phone call between her and her mother. We feel this will translate our storyline to our audience better. When we get to filming we may clip some of the scenes, but we filmed quite a few different shots and scenes to have more of a variety.
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